My explanation text

This is my explanation text that I did at school. Hope you enjoy it!

The Elf Waker

Are you tired of  your elf sleeping on his money earning shifts? Yes! Well no need to fear, with the all new Elf Waker your elf wont sleep on the shifts you give him – and he will earn more money! Just follow these wonderfull steps. This crazy contraption will change the atmosphere in your absoulutly  noisy home; you can not find anything simpler…

Firstly, (as fast as a thunderball rushing through the wind) a blue roaring fast football falls onto the bellows. Consequently, the bellows puff a huge gush of wind towards the baby blue and frosty white windmill. You’re getting on really well!

Now the windmill’s wings will quickly turn. Attached to the windmill is a copper cable. As the windmill is quickly but queitly turning, the copper cable is turning around too! Keep reading!

There is a spiky cog attached to the cable and attached to the cog is another cable -don’t worry there’s only 2 cables- that cable is attached to a platform and on that platform is a basketball! Are you bored yet? Well don’t be because here comes the fun part!

As the cogs and cables are turning, the platfirm is being pulled to the side then the basketball has no-where to rest so gravity  pulls it down onto the huge carrot. You are nearly there! Keep on reading to find out more.

When it  falls on to the carrot, it  slides down the carrot because its slanted. Then the orange and black curvy basketball will bounce up and down until eventually the horn will honk; it will make a humongous sound. Then it will wake the elf.

We hope you enjoyed reading this master piece. I’m sure your lazy and lousy elf will wake up and will work non-stop. We hope you found it easy to follow this explanation from start to finish!

6 comments

  1. Nice idea Aman! I might put my explanation on my blog too!! If it is ok with you I might put a link to your blog on my blog!!!

  2. Hi Aman,
    I was just checking out your explanation text you wrote at school. I might Put mine and maybe yours if that’s ok with you on my and like Hannah said I might again if it’s ok with you put a link to your blog on my blog. By the way, I’ve changed it’s name again to charlottesbrilliantblog if you want to comment on it I’d be thrilled as I’ve got NO!!!!! comments yet.

    Charlotte

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